Erzsi Deak of Hen&Ink will be accepting picture book submissions from 12 x 12 members in June. This is a special opportunity because “The Coop” as it is lovingly called, is not open to unsolicited submissions!

Erzsi Deak 1So. What to say about Erzsi Deak, who is my own agent, albeit only for a short time (read: we haven’t gone out on submission with anything yet).

Here are a few things. She is whip-smart and forward-thinking. As a “boundary-pusher” (can I find more phrases to hyphenate?) in publishing, part of the reason I knew we’d be a good fit is because she doesn’t shy away from new challenges or the opportunity to chart new ground. She does not see herself as just a seller of manuscripts but as an advocate for her clients’ careers. Another thing I appreciate about her is that she’s not a “client-coddler” (there’s another one, AND I think I made that one up). Meaning — she will stretch you to do your best work and beyond. Ask a straight question and you’ll get a straight answer. I’ve already found that quality of hers immensely helpful in thinking about and planning my writing projects.

Last, but certainly not least, she LOVES picture books. But she is, to put it in her own words, a “hard ass” about them. 

In short, I’m proud to be one of the chicks in the coop and hope some of my 12 x 12 brethren will join me there. :-)

I asked Erzsi what she looks for in a picture book manuscript, and here is her response.
PICTURE BOOKS: LESS IS MORE AND S IS FOR STORY! 
What I’m looking for in a picture book manuscript is a shorter (often less than 500 words; definitely less than 1000 words) character-driven story with a beginning, middle, and an unexpected inevitable ending that rides both the inner / emotional and outer / action threads and speaks to the universal needs of kids everywhere without being banal or trite or derivative. A text that leaves plenty of room for illustrations and that will stand the test of many readings. Verbs and language that dance, shout and sigh across the page and through the story. A character or characters we care about and want to hang out with. Again and again. I’m not looking for pure poetry, rhyme, nor anything didactic. I love quiet stories and laugh-out-loud stories. I’m not the right reader for gross-out books just for the sake of being gross. If you can include wordplay, terrific, but not where the story gets lost.
To sum up: Write a terrific original story with an unexpected inevitable ending in fresh language that leaves room for an illustrator — and multiple re-reads. And have fun!
Easy, right?? Just KIDDING!

A little bit about Erzsi Deak, founder of Hen&ink, from the Hen&ink website

“Hen&ink is a literary studio with a twist. We aim to work in the traditional publishing arena, but also to encourage and develop work across cultural borders, genres, and media.

Hen&ink founder, Erzsi Deàk, brings her 25+ years experience on the international stage, connecting individuals and companies with those around the globe who can make things happen – no matter where you find yourself.

With her growing list of prize-winning clients and new voices from around the world, Erzsi Deàk meets often with publishers in the US and UK and aggressively markets domestic and foreign rights, attending the Bologna, London and Frankfurt rights fairs. 

Erzsi’s book, PERIOD PIECES: STORIES FOR GIRLS, was a Bank Street pick and her articles on the world of children’s publishing regularly appear in CHILDREN’S WRITERS & ILLUSTRATORS’ MARKET. Based in France, Erzsi ran the international arm of the SCBWI for nearly ten years, developing and mentoring writers, illustrators and publishing programs in 28 countries. She founded and organized the SCBWI Bologna Conference and was awarded the SCBWI Member of the Year in 1999 and 2008. 

But mostly, Erzsi is on the forefront of the international publishing scene, doing what she does best, connecting people across borders and genres.”

Full 12 x 12 submission guidelines and requirements for Erzsi will be posted in the Submission Station section of the 12 x 12 Membership Forum, accessible to Little GOLDen Book members by 2:00 p.m. EST on May 31st. In the meantime, here are links with more information about Erzsi.
Good Luck!
Hen & Ink website and blog: http://www.henandink.com
Erzsi’s website and blog: http://www.erzsideak.com/
Erzsi Deak’s profile on LinkedIn
Erzsi Deak on Twitter
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Please welcome author Julie Falatko to the How I Got My Agent series. Julie is a two-time member of the 12 x 12 picture book writing challenge and a friend to boot! We’re both Brain Burps girls, and although we have not (yet) met in person, I feel like I’ve known her forever. I’ve long since forgiven her for stealing snapping up the best blog name ever — World of Julie. I’m so happy for her and I know you will be too!

Julie, how long had you been writing before seeking an agent, and what made you decide it was time to look for one? What kind of research did you do before submitting?

When I started getting serious about writing, I researched all the publishers who accepted unagented submissions, and it quickly became clear I’d do better with an agent.

It was still another year-and-a-half after realizing I’d need an agent before I started submitting. I did a lot of research both into agents and into the querying process. It seemed like a lot of people were doing a LOT of querying, which is certainly one approach. But I know that my stories are a little quirky and weird, and might not be for everyone. I only sent queries to agents who seemed like they’d want my style of writing. It would be a waste of everyone’s time otherwise. (Seriously, some days I barely have time to tie my shoes. I definitely don’t have time to send a query to an agent who doesn’t like books like the ones I write.)

The dreaded questions: How many queries?  How many rejections?

Eleven queries. Of those, five were basic rejections. Two were what I call, in my spreadsheet, “lovely rejections,” meaning personal rejections. Those personal rejections kept me going.

And there was one more rejection that was above and beyond a lovely rejection. I want to frame this rejection. It was the most encouraging, heartening, happy-making rejection imaginable. I know not every agent has time to send a personal rejection, or even a response. But when agents are moved to write something that lets the writer know they’re not crazy for trying to do this thing, it makes a huge difference.

Two agents (Danielle and another one) wanted to see more of my work. When Danielle (Danielle Smith of ForeWord Literary) offered, I nudged the other agent and they said they were going to make me an offer also (!!) but were stepping aside given the situation.

How’s my math? (You see why I need an agent?) Eleven queries, I’ve mentioned ten responses. There was one more that kind of fell through the cracks – I sent a follow-up nudge after Danielle offered representation and never heard anything. That happens, too.  It’s ok.

Was it difficult to find an agent who wanted to represent an author-only focusing solely on picture books?

Not really! But maybe that’s because I didn’t send out too many queries. All the information is out there. You look on QueryTracker and follow interesting agents on Twitter, and it’s pretty easy to make a list of agents to look at.

The greater focus for me was to find an agent who would think my stories were charming and funny, rather than shudder and try to quietly toss them out the nearest window.

How did you know your agent was “the one?

When I saw that Foreword Literary had formed in March, and that Danielle would be their picture book agent, I took another look at her blog, There’s a Book. And I saw that we have nearly identical taste in books.

So I sent off my story. I think you have to be really zen about submissions. You write your best story, you write your best query, and then there’s nothing else you can do. Forget about it for a while.

And so I was very, very excited when Danielle responded about two weeks later asking for more stories. And then about a week after that she emailed me to set up a phone call. And we all know (or hope we know) about The Call.

On the phone, over email, and online, Danielle is enthusiastic and extremely supportive. She is just as passionate about children’s books as I am (as we all are, those of you reading this). So I knew right away that I liked her, as a person. It was clear that she is also extremely organized, knowledgeable, connected, and would be good at contracts and things, so I knew she is also an excellent agent.

Do you think your platform (blog, reviewer on Brain Burps, etc.) helped you find your agent?

The very first question Danielle asked me on the phone was, “Do you still do the reviews for Brain Burps?” She was asking because the fact that I do picture book reviews shows that I have a knowledge of the industry. You know, I’m so surrounded by you all, these smart, smart writer people. But I guess there are people who just dash off what they think is a picture book and send it off to whomever. So doing the podcast reviews immediately put a big star over my head that said, “This one’s not a loon” (not for that reason, at least).

I will make no comment. :-)

If 12 x 12 helped you in any way during your agent search/development of craft, can you tell us how?

I can honestly say that I would not have an agent if it weren’t for 12×12. (I swear I didn’t hold her in a headlock and make her say that!!)

Last summer (2012) I had one story polished and submittable. So I submitted it, twice (and got rejected). But then a friend in my critique group got an agent, and the biggest lesson she shared from that experience was that you have to have at least three finished, polished stories before you even think about submitting.

So I stopped submitting to focus on writing. If you remember my 12×12 post from last year, 12×12 in 2012 gave me a lot of first drafts. I buckled down and finished them.

This process was one of the most intense things I’ve ever done. But it was something I passionately wanted to do, and felt like I had to do.

(There was another factor in this, and that was my incredibly supportive husband. He has a particular brand of tough-love motivation that works brilliantly for me. And so he said, “You’ve been talking about writing for years now. Enough. Either do it or don’t. But if you’re going to do it, do it.” And he was right. Was I going to do this or not?)

I put my younger two kids in preschool two days a week, and my husband forbid me from running errands on those days. So I revised, and I wrote. I focused more than I knew I could. It was a blast.

Okay, I have to interject here and say I love your husband! I mean, I don’t LOVE love him, because that would be wrong, but what a superstar for both supporting AND pushing you!!

And while I was working 12×12 kept rolling. And I’m proud to say that my December, January, March, April, and May drafts are all either done or at their final stages with Danielle.

12×12 taught me that the more you write, the better your writing gets. I know, I know. Caveman Writer Guy pretty much wrote that sentiment on the cave walls in mammoth blood. But still, it’s one thing to know it, and another thing to experience it yourself. It’s practice. And the more I write, the less my drafts are like those things from the beginning of 2012, which I’m going to use for firestarters the next time I go camping.

What advice would you give to picture book writers looking for agents today?

The first thing would be to take your time. Get those three (or more!) stories ready. Join a critique group. Revise a lot.

Write a lot, too. Expect to write some terrible stories. That’s ok. You need to get the terrible ones out of your system. They’re all stepping stones to your amazing stories.

The second would be to do your research. There’s often a lot of information online about agents. Find out as much as you can. Does the agent seem like someone who would like your stuff? Who would be able to sell your manuscripts? Do you like what you read about the agent?

And do your research about how to query, too. There are approximately one gazillion articles on the internet about proper query formatting, and common agent pet peeves. It’s pretty easy to figure this stuff out. Take your time, and do it right.

You have four children. Have you ever considered selling them in order to fund attendance at writer’s conferences?

I think it is worth noting that I’ve never been to a writer’s conference. I know they’re amazing, and a great way to meet agents. But they’re not a necessity. I have a lot of wee children, and the time and money for going to writer’s conferences never grew out of that tree I planted in the backyard expressly for that purpose.

Despite the fact that I am a self-professed conference junkie, I think it is HUGELY inspiring that you found your agent through the standard, “available to everyone” query process. It just goes to show all of us that talent does rise to the top. There are as many paths as there are writers. The most important thing, always, is the craft.

I still think the most important thing to do if you want to get an agent, to sell a book, is to write. A lot. Work on your craft. There are so many “other” things you can do – go to conferences, blog, join 12×12, Tweet, Tumbl, Foofinfarf (that’s a new one I just made up; it’ll be super hot by next week). Do those things if you can, but first, always, write.

Oh! But that’s not what you asked me. My children, I’m afraid, are not worth much on the open market. Instead I am training them to do all the housework so that I can spend more time writing. So far it’s going…well, look around. You can see how it’s going. Watch out! Don’t step there! Yeah, ok. It’s not going so well so far. Though my 7 year-old does make a fabulous English muffin pizza.

Julie Falatko writes picture books from her home in Maine, which she shares with her husband and four children. She reviews picture books for Katie Davis’s Brain Burps About Books podcast, blogs at worldofjulie.com, and bakes when she’s procrastinating. You can find her on Twitter at @JulieFalatko.

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If I had to choose a phrase to describe today’s Tuesday 12 x 12 author Carrie Charley Brown, it would be “Newbie No More!” Her excitement and dedication to writing and this community is contagious and inspiring. She’s grabbed her passion for writing with both hands and clearly is not going to let go! And while I ordinarily wouldn’t suggest writing while driving, I had to both laugh and give a thumbs up in Carrie’s case. You go, girl! Please welcome Carrie!

How do you Spell Newbie?

Nervous, Excited, Worried, Busy, Inquisitive, Eager.

That’s enough going on inside one head to explode!  So, how do you spell relief?

12 x 12, of course!

My journey from teacher to author began in the form of a little spark in 1991. It ignited into a picture book manuscript. That flame was rather snuffed spending nineteen years on the back burner, so that a teaching career, marriage, kids, and life could happen. My husband and I assumed reversed roles when an unexpected lay-off terminated his career. Back to teaching I went! I have always wondered why that flame chose to lash out at such an inopportune time.

I vividly remember being half asleep, pumping myself with coffee, and then yelling some not-so-nice words at some guy who cut me off in traffic. I took one look at the surprised expressions on my kids’ faces in the backseat, and a fire started to roar through my mind. I grabbed a crumpled up napkin, and started writing furiously as we blazed down the expressway. (Yikes!) When I ran out of room, I snatched a wrinkled receipt and scribbled more. I was bursting! But, with such a busy schedule, I had to stuff the ideas into a notebook for a later date. I was so eager to get into my writing, but my mind was only on break during my morning drives.

My husband finally found work and we reversed our roles again. I joined the SCBWI in the fall of 2012, and finally completed the two manuscripts that had burned themselves into my driving time in 2010. I felt free, and very, very green! I read everything I could get my hands on, started a critique group, and researched agents. I completed four additional manuscripts and a handful of short stories. I received my first big rejection during a professional critique with a big time editor at a SCBWI event in October.  My flame didn’t feel so bright anymore. After trying to revise my manuscript in every thinkable way, it went in the drawer.

Enter: PiBoIdMo 2012. Yes! All I needed was more ideas! Sparks were everywhere! From there, I heard about 12 x 12 and became a Gold Member in January.

12 x 12 spells relief:

Nervous?  I am meeting so many awesome writers from all over the world! Connecting lead me to my critique groups, an amazing critique partner, and collaborations. It makes me feel comfortable when my new colleagues offer suggestions, and recommend trusted sources for education, information, and professional services.

Excited!  With a special mixture of PiBoIdMo ideas and a bunch of new ones, I am writing my little heart out!  I love “reporting in” at the end of each month and daily to my critique partner.

Worried?  It is comforting to have people all around me that know exactly what I am going through. 12 x 12 is like a big hug!  Each and every person I have interacted with in this process has strengthened me as a professional and a person. I am learning that differences are good, and this business is truly subjective.

Busy!  The First 250, Query Corner, and Pitch Perfect all allow me to critique the work of other writers. I enjoy helping, and feel a knack for editing. It has helped me become better at revising my own work, too.

Inquisitive? I found support in the 12 x 12 Facebook Group when I needed to know if I was “normal.” Many of my questions are answered by reading the posts of others.

Eager!  12 x 12 has motivated me to produce 7 new manuscripts since January! I am actively submitting and received my first three requests! Everyone has to start somewhere, and 12 x 12 is the perfect place for a Newbie!

Carrie Charley Brown has been inspiring children with the magic of picture books ever since her first teaching job. After 10 years of teaching and an equal amount of years as a full-time mom, she opened a new chapter of her life as a writer in 2012. Her current writing projects include picture books, adult humor, and middle grade fiction. She lives in Mansfield, Texas with her husband Richard, and their three children. Not surprisingly, her children all love to read and write. You can follow her on Twitter at @carriebrowntx or her new blog websites, Carrie On… Together! or Carrie On.

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Today I am ecstatic to bring you a different kind of “How I Got My Agent” story. This one is special because it is the first, of hopefully many, success stories of authors finding agents through 12 x 12. Once again I was moved to tears by a member’s expression of what 12 x 12 has done for her confidence, her writing and her career. I can honestly say the only time I’ve ever been more pleased to announce that someone signed with an agent is when it was me! Without further ado, congratulations to Pat Miller, who recently signed with Stephen Fraser of Jennifer DeChiara Literary Agency! May there be many more 12 x 12 participants who come after you! :-)

I began my writing career out of green-eyed jealousy in 1994 with a magazine article. (That’s another story.) I mostly wrote for school librarians. I reconnected with children’s writing, thanks to Tara Lazar’s Picture Book Idea Month challenge, in November 2012. Tara mentioned Julie Hedlund’s upcoming 12 x 12 Picture Book Challenge. Perhaps it was the timing, perhaps the financial investment, but I decided to commit. Here’s how 12 x 12 has made 2013 my luckiest writing year.

ENCOURAGEMENT I began reading other people’s work and submitting my own in the 250 Words Forum. I had done more than six months of research on the sea captain who invented the hole in the doughnut. Now I felt encouraged to stop researching and start writing.

COMPANIONSHIP The 12 x 12 Facebook page peopled my writing space with amiable fellow writers. I was surrounded by their hopes and encouraged by their work. My difficulties were theirs–I wasn’t alone. I began showing up at my desk every morning at 7:00, feeling the invisible but warm company of kindred spirits.

ANSWERS TO QUESTIONS Is a particular conference worth the money? Which writing books are most helpful? How does one format a picture book? The 12×12 group reminds me of a trampoline—throw out a question and within hours, answers bounce up from all over! When I asked if anyone had experience with making book trailers, Julie connected me with Katie Davis. I’ll be joining her Video Idiot Boot Campin May.

RESOURCES Members often suggest sites, blogs, and resources that inspire and educate. Lori Degman told us about a site called Rate Your Story. Over the next couple of months, I submitted three stories. My Stone Soup variant rated a 7, The Hole Story of the Doughnut earned a 3, and Lone Star, Lone Star convinced someone to give it a 1. Encouraged, I sent Lone Star out to several regional publishers.

EXPERT HELP I committed to bringing my Hole Story to completion. I returned to Rate your Story to peruse their list of editors for hire. From a list of heavy hitters, I chose Jill Esbaum, author of 11 picture books and former instructor for the Institute of Children’s Literature. She helped me revise my story, and with high hopes, I submitted it to the Highlights Fiction Contest.

I had more than 200 pages of research on my doughnut inventor. In February I began to feel a book was necessary. But where to begin? What to include? What to leave out? On January 23, Elaine Kearns recommended Dear Editor.com, where you send in questions to editor Deborah Halverson. Deborah’s answer to my questions appeared the next day. I began the book.

NEW DIRECTIONS In mid-January, Janie Reinart posted a site about building one’s author platform. Reading it convinced me I needed to learn about using social media to promote my work. In a marvelous coincidence, another member recommended marketing magician Rivka Kawano. On January 28, I took her three-hour online seminar called “Author Success in 2013”. It was so helpful that I signed for her twelve week course,  Author’s Marketing Class.

CRITIQUE GROUP In early February, Laura Carpenter posted on the forum’s Critique Connect that she wanted to form a group. Lickety-split, nine of us joined her from seven states and Canada—my first critique group! Soon the stories began to fly, as well as posts about our vacations, our discouragements, and our delight in the group.

SHARED SUCCESSES  We participated in the voting for Janie Reinart’s book, Love You More Than You Know, nominated for Best Cleveland Book of 2013. And she won! Tracey Cox shared news of the debut of her cleverly named Arachnabet: An Alphabet of Spiders. Cheryl Lawton Malone nearly won the March Madness Poetry Match with her poem, “Autocorrect”. The success of any of us gave us all hope.

ACCESS TO AGENTS In January, Emma Walton Hamilton taught us to write query letters and posted her analysis of 40 queries submitted by 12x12ers. In February, Stephen Fraser of the Jennifer de Chiara Literary Agency became the first of 11 monthly agents willing to look at our work and make suggestions.

By mid-February, The Hole Story of the Doughnut had been through numerous revisions and shaped up as a picture book biography. I crafted my e-query based on Emma’s advice. I followed it with the manuscript that had been through my critique group, Rate Your Story, Jill Esbaum, and Kathi Appelt, the Newbery-honor winner whose critique I won at a local SCBWI auction. With a small prayer, I hit “send” and off went my manuscript to Stephen Fraser.

A REALIZED DREAM Julie sent out interview and biographic information on Stephen Fraser when he stepped up to be our first agent reader. He sounded experienced, passionate, and kind. Just the kind of agent I would like if I had one. He amazed all of us by turning our stories around in three days or less. And he liked my story. Could I make some changes and resubmit? The day after April Fool’s Day, Stephen called me and offered to represent The Hole Story. I tried not to squeal like a pre-teen at a Bieber concert. He patiently answered my questions and said his contract would be in the mail. HIS CONTRACT WOULD BE IN THE MAIL! I was fizzy with joy, thrilled to have an agent, and very aware of how much I owe to Julie Hedlund and  the writers of 12 x 12. Thanks to them, my nineteen-year career became an overnight success.

Pat Miller is the author of 20 professional books and more than 200 articles for school librarians. Her first children’s book, Substitute Groundhog, garnered 32 rejection letters before publication by Albert Whitman. It was named a Junior Library Guild selection. Find out more at www.patmillerbooks.com.

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carolphotoI hope you all are as moved by this post from today’s Tuesday 12 x 12 author Carol Coven Grannick as I was. Carol’s words struck such a chord in me. It is SO easy as writers to get mired in self-doubt and anguish and forget why we started writing in the first place. The tagline of her blog — Focusing More on the Writing and Less on the Publication — is going to be my new mantra. It’s not that I don’t want to publish many more books, it’s just that focusing too much on the publication side of things can suck the joy out of the act of writing. I am grateful that Carol found 12 x 12 this year, and I for one will be seeking out her gentle counsel when I need more writing resilience. Please welcome Carol!

THE FREEDOM OF LETTING GO

The past year has been a bountiful, meaningful one in my long journey as a committed, hardworking children’s writer – not because I got a book contract, but because I didn’t.

During the last decade, I’d heard supportive comments for years as short fiction appeared in children’s magazines, several unpublished picture books won several awards and got me an agent, with whom I parted ways after two acquisitions committees but no contract led him to stop sending out my work.

Although I wrote for love, life and urgency, and because I had stories to tell, I wanted to join colleagues who announced their book contracts month after month. I followed all the recommendations and collected plenty of impersonal and personal rejections. I was persistent and resilient. I believed that if I continued along this path, I’d get published.

And then about a year and a half ago I found I was spending too much time recovering from submissions into what many writers were calling the Black Hole of publishing: “If you don’t hear from us, assume we’re not interested.” If I don’t hear from you by when? I wondered. Some said, but many didn’t. Six weeks? Two months? Ten years?

I had to change something. So I challenged my basic assumption about being a children’s author with these words: There is a distinct possibility that I will never get a traditional book contract.

I shocked myself, let the words sink in, cried, sobbed.

Then I stopped. And when I did, I asked myself The Question: Now what?

The answer was easy. Now I am a writer. Now I write.

I had to put the longing for publication on a back burner. It was controlling too much of my writing and my life. I didn’t give up hope, just preoccupation.

Relief billowed in, filled me with a sense of freedom. Ideas for new work, classes I wanted to take, manuscripts I’d revise without losing the heart of the story because it might not be marketable, all seemed possible. “Shoulds” disappeared and joy returned.

I had always been, and would always be, a writer.

Then the oddest and best things happened in a year that unfolded, full of surprises. A new blog to keep me honest, an illustration class I never thought I’d take, query letters more true to my natural voice that got responses and requests for more work, and amazing workshops with authors whose work I loved and who were brilliant teachers as well.

My writing and my well-being blossomed.

And just when I felt ready to begin to submit again, I discovered 12 x 12. Where had it been last year? Well, right here. But I wasn’t. Really, just when I was ready, I found Julie’s site. Was it magic? No. It was luck: readiness meeting opportunity – such a crucial component of our journeys.

I hesitated not one moment. I scraped together the funds to become a GOLD level member, and although I’m still more of a lurker than a poster, I’m loving the forum, loving the opportunities, loving the resources. This post is an easier way of entry for me, and I’m grateful for the opportunity.

But mostly I’m loving the existence of all of us in community together, picture book writers who don’t believe this precious genre is on the way out.

Carol Coven Grannick writes picture books, middle grade and young adult fiction, and personal essays. Her regular column, The Irrepressible Writer, appears in the SCBWI-Illinois PRAIRE WIND (http://illinois-scbwi.org) and she blogs about her creative process at http://TodayIAmAWriter.blogspot.com. As a writer/clinical social worker, she has an archive of articles about how to create and maintain resilience for the writing life at: http://TheIrrepressibleWriter.com and counsels/coaches individuals and groups on caring for the inner journey of the writing life.

 

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Susan Hawk of The Bent Agency (TBA) will be accepting picture book submissions from 12 x 12 members in April.

Susan-Hawk-photo4I’m pleased to introduce you to Susan today. Although I have not met her personally, she graciously accepted the invitation to be a 12 x 12 featured agent immediately after I sent it, and I’ve heard nothing but great things about her from clients and fellow agents.

A little bit about Susan from The Bent Agency website:

I come to TBA from Children’s Book Marketing, where I worked for over 15 years, most recently as the Marketing Director at Henry Holt Books for Young Readers, and previous to that as the Library Marketing Director at Penguin Young Readers Group. I was lucky to be involved in many different books during that time ranging from Eric Carle’s Baby Bear, Baby Bear to Betsy Partridge’s This Land Was Made for You and Me, to Nancy Werlin’s Black Mirror, as well as the work of Mary E Pearson, Richard Peck and Joan Bauer.

While at Penguin, I also worked for a time in Dutton Editorial, acquiring projects for that list. My favorite part of that time was being able to read new submissions — finding something wonderful and imagining where it can go was thrilling to me then and remains so now.

I handle books for children exclusively: picture books, chapter books, middle grade and YA, fiction and non-fiction. In non-fiction I’m looking for books that relate to kid’s daily lives and their concerns with the world. In picture books, I’m looking particularly for author-illustrators, succinct but expressive texts, and characters as indelible as my childhood favorites Ferdinand, Madeline, George and Martha.

I asked Susan what she is looking for in the picture book market these days, and she sent me this response:
“I really like texts that are funny or evocative. I like quirky things too. And I’m definitely looking for non-fiction.” Some recent picture book favorites are:

I Want My Hat Back, by Jon Klassen

Me…Jane, by Patrick McDonnell

House Held Up By Trees, by Ted Kooser

Interrupting Chicken, by David Ezra Stein

All the World, by Liz Garton Scanlon

The Hello, Goodbye Window, by Norton Juster

This Moose Belongs to Me, by Oliver Jeffers

Balloons Over Broadway, by Melissa Sweet

The Day-Glo Brothers, by Chris Barton

Show Way, by Jacqueline Woodson

Full 12 x 12 submission guidelines and requirements for Susan will be posted in the Submission Station section of the 12 x 12 Membership Forum, accessible to Little GOLDen Book members by 2:00 p.m. EST on March 31st. In the meantime, here are some links with more information about Susan.
Good Luck!
Susan’s profile on the TBA website
Agent Susan Hawk Talks Picture Books – Heather Ayris Burnell’s Blog
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Vivian Kirkfield picA This post from today’s 12 x 12 author Vivian Kirkfield took my breath away! Look how much she has accomplished over the past year! I am both honored and humbled that 12 x 12 was among sparks that lit her creative bonfire. Vivian’s experience epitomizes everything I aim and hope for with 12 x 12 — that people find a safe place to learn, become part of a caring community and stretch themselves as writers. I hope you enjoy her story as much as I did. Welcome Vivian!

I love books! As a young child, I was small in stature and people would stare at what looked like a walking stack of books when I left the library. This obsession love for books of any genre continued throughout my life. To be perfectly honest though, picture books had me from the first page turn.

As a kindergarten and Head Start teacher, I read picture books with my students. When I became a mom, my children might not have had all of the newest and most popular toys…but they ALWAYS had lots of picture books. And I enjoyed scribbling stories for them as we waited at the doctor’s office or sat in the car on long road trips. Sadly, most of those stories were lost during our many moves…and not one of those stories was ever submitted.

Fast forward to 2012…through a stroke of luck/karma/destiny…I connected with Julie Hedlund…discovered 12×12…and embarked on a year of sheer bliss and happiness. And 12×12 in 2013 is even more supercalifragilisticexpealidocious!

For me, there is a magical quality surrounding 12×12. Miraculous things occur:

  • DIRECTION AND GUIDANCE: I now know where I am headed (most of the time…and my husband might disagree). I write every day (picture book stories in addition to checks to pay the bills). This year, as a Golden Level Member, I’m able to submit to agents without the angst and anxiety of finding them myself…although now, because of 12×12, I know I can do that.
  • COMMUNITY AND RESOURCES: Being part of this group is like coming home…there is support and encouragement from other members. I can honestly say I’ve never been part of a more generous group of people. I even found my amazing online international critique group here (big wave to Hannah, Tina, Diane, Carrie and Allie). The 12×12 Facebook page is a treasure trove of information about query letters and agent submission and contests and everything writing picture books. If you have a question, ask it…someone will provide an answer. If you have a problem…post it…someone will offer a solution. And everyone really CARES…about each other…and everyone is genuinely happy when success comes knocking at someone’s door/mailbox. There is a sharing of knowledge, expertise and LOVE that shines through each comment.

In September of 2010, I published a book to help parents and teachers. I wanted to get it ‘out there’ in social media-land even though I always shrank (and being so small, I have no inches to spare) from technology. I set up an author website. I started a parenting blog. I got active on Twitter, Facebook, Linkedin, Google+, Pinterest…and I’m still hobbling along learning every day.

In 2012, because of 12×12, I wrote twelve picture book drafts, entered several writing challenges and contests, did PiBoIdMo and won Emma Walton Hamilton’s Just Write For Kids online picture book writing course (thank you, Julie and Emma!). Best of all, I connected with amazing people and will be speaking at the 2013 Asian Festival of Children’s Content in Singapore this May…because of one of those connections.

So, what does 12×12 have in store for me this year? I’ve already written two picture book drafts. I submitted my first-ever picture book query in January and clicked ‘send’ for my first-ever picture book manuscript submission in February. I also submitted a story for the Highlights Fiction Contest. I’m polishing up a new picture book story and will be submitting it to agent Tricia Lawrence later this month, as well as to the SCBWI Barbara Karlin Grant competition.

The best thing is that I am having so much fun. When I retired this past December, my younger son told me, “Mom, you are turning to the next page in the book of your life.”  12×12 is definitely a very important chapter in that book!

Vivian Kirkfield is an educator and mom. Her mission: help children become lovers of books and reading and empower parents with tools and tactics that make the difficult job of parenting a little easier and a lot more fun. She believes that one of the most important tasks of parenthood is to read with children. When she is not hiking and fly-fishing in the Colorado Rockies with her husband of 45 years, Vivian is reading, crafting and cooking with local kindergarten classes…and writing picture book stories, of course.

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Tricia LawrenceTricia Lawrence of the Erin Murphy Literary Agency (EMLA) will be accepting picture book submissions from 12 x 12 members in March.

I have never met Tricia in person, but that will soon change because she will be in both Bologna AND NJ-SCBWI! I will say that I’ve been impressed with her thoughtfulness and responses in every email exchange I’ve had with her. Plus, when she started at EMLA it was as a social media strategist – how cool is that? I’m sure her clients benefit tremendously from having an agent with marketing and promotion know-how.

Prior to joining EMLA, Tricia spent 17 years of working as a developmental and production-based copyeditor (from kids book to college textbooks).

As an associate-agent at EMLA, Tricia looks for picture books that “look at the world in a unique and unusual way, with characters that are alive both on and off the page.” When I asked her to share any insights into what she is looking for in PBs these days, this is what she said:

“With PB manuscripts, I am looking for an experience, all the questions I have are positive, not coming from confusion, but from “Oh, I love this; can I have more?” A really strong voice is a huge plus. What Anastasia Suen calls “picture writing” so that you can read it and then see it in both pictures and words, without massive and painful effort. 
 
Not very specific, but I’m really looking for something amazing (isn’t everybody!) with strong character, specific word choice, playful or sweet, with that wonderful hook that takes me in an unexpected turn.”
Full submission guidelines and requirements for Tricia will be posted in the Submission Station section of the 12 x 12 Membership Forum, accessible to Little GOLDen Book members by 2:00 p.m. EST on February 28. In the meantime, here are some links with more information about Tricia.
Good Luck!
Tricia’s profile on the EMLA website
Cynsations interview featuring both Erin and Tricia discussing social media for authors
Mother. Write. (Repeat). Author-Agent Interview
Profile on The Write Path
Interview on Forever Rewriting
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2012-07-28 at 11-37-43By now I supposed you’ve guessed what the “huge news” is that I alluded to in this week’s Gratitude Sunday post. There are no words to describe how ecstatic I am to announce that, as of yesterday, I am now represented by Erzsi Deak of Hen & Ink Literary.

To celebrate, I am giving away the spreadsheet I’ve kept these past few years of agents who represent picture books. How can you win? Easy! Leave a comment on this post before midnight EST today and it’s yours!! Share with your friends. Everybody is a winner, just like the rubber duckie game at the fair. :-)

I was just thinking the other day how this series had been neglected for a while and I should find someone to post. Little did I know I would be given the opportunity to turn the tables and interview myself! *gleeful dancing* So here goes…

Julie, how long had you been writing before seeking an agent, and what made you decide it was time to look for one? What kind of research did you do before submitting?I

I began writing for children in 2006 when my daughter was three and my son an infant. I attended my first regional SCBWI conference in 2007 and quickly fired off a submission I was sure would be accepted (the very first completed book I’d written which, after many substantial revisions, was published last week as A TROOP IS A GROUP OF MONKEYS). Big mistake. Rookie mistake. A few months later, I attended the National SCBWI conference in New York. I learned so much at that conference, but the biggest lesson was how “new” I was and how much I had yet to learn.

I put a moratorium on submissions for a full year while I learned everything I could about the craft of writing picture books and the children’s publishing industry. I began submitting again at the beginning of 2010 once I felt I had a foundation beneath my writing.

I knew I wanted an agent for several reasons. To take over the submissions process, definitely, but mostly to have a partner in what is an emotional, complicated, ever-changing career path. I’ve always felt working with an agent, as opposed to submitting to many editors, would help me navigate my career, make the best decisions and, quite frankly, make it less scary!

I did most of my research online, scouring blogs and websites and compiling the information into the aforesaid spreadsheet. Eventually I began targeting conferences where my top-choice agents were speaking so I could meet them in person. I was fortunate enough to meet Erzsi last March at the Bologna Book Fair. (I did so much research I ended up writing an ebook on submissions, which you can get for free if you sign up for my mailing list)

The dreaded questions: How many queries?  How many rejections?

I was chicken careful and strategic about my submissions, only sending a few queries out at a time and one manuscript at a time. I would then reflect on the feedback I got (or not) and generally use it to make further revisions before querying the same manuscript again. So I didn’t get too many rejections, although some of the ones I did get were painful indeed.

It’s a tough market for picture books. Was it difficult to find an agent who wanted to represent an author-only focusing solely on picture books? How did you know your agent was “the one?”

Yes, it was difficult. Yet, agents are still seeking picture book clients. I was surprised by how easily I filled my roster of participating agents for 12 x 12, for example. I think agents are understandably quite discerning about taking on picture book clients, but they are taking them.

I first met Erzsi at the SCBWI booth at the Bologna Book Fair last year. I had a 20 minute pitch appointment and we spent the first 10 minutes chatting with great excitement and fascination about all the changes in going on in publishing. Finally, I said, “Wait! I better talk to you about my work or we’re going to run out of time.”

I sent her one of my manuscripts and she offered encouragement and suggestions for revision, which I made over time. In the meantime, I was busy working on other projects, attending more conferences, learning more craft and immersing myself in digital publishing in the form of storybook apps.

Given the trajectory my career had taken in the months since I first submitted to Erzsi, I was committed to finding an agent who would embrace digital publishing. I knew Erzsi to be forward-thinking in this area because one of my good friends, Sarah Towle, is her client and has only published digitally thus far. I also appreciated her global view, which is one I share (hence, the upcoming whirlwind European tour).

I also wanted an agent who would provide editorial feedback on manuscripts and have the patience to help me get it “just right” before submitting. I knew from the thoughtful and in-depth comments I received from Erzsi both times I submitted to her that she was indeed that type of agent.

Finally, when we talked on the phone about the contract, I was reminded of how much I enjoy talking to her. Yes, choosing an agent is a business decision, but I think if you’re going to be working side by side with a person for years, it’s a great bonus if, in addition to trusting their instincts and valuing their expertise, you can enjoy that person’s company .

Has your writing process changed since signing with an agent?

Since we just signed yesterday, I don’t know yet! :-)

What advice would you give to picture book writers looking for agents today?

  • Always put your craft first. Always. Hold off on submitting until you are confident in your craft.
  • Remember that no writing is ever wasted. I didn’t believe this at all when I started. I would roll my eyes, convinced I was the exception to the rule – that everything I wrote would be publishable. Boy was I wrong. Then I went through a period where I was so disheartened I was convinced everything I wrote was terrible (some of it was) and thus a waste of time. Neither turned out to be true. Everything you write will make you a better writer. Be glad for each and every piece of writing because you never know when you might be able to resurrect something – even if it’s just a kernel of an idea – from an old manuscript.
  • Do not be afraid to submit to the same agent more than once. I went through two rounds of submissions with Erzsi before she took me on. Another agent I met at the RMC-SCBWI conference this fall, Karen Grencik, said this in her speech: “A no today is not a no forever.” In the span of a year, you will grow as a writer. Even if you’ve received a rejection from an agent in the past, if you have a new manuscript you think would be a good fit for him/her – go for it!
  • Make personal connections whenever possible. Try not to be a wallflower at conferences or other events when you have a chance to meet agents. They are there to meet you! But be a real person. Have a normal conversation. When you go to query them, remind them of the connection you made. If you aren’t able to make in-person connections, do your research before querying to find out their tastes, their background, something about their lives. Never, ever send a form letter.

What’s up next/what are you working on now?

Well, I just submitted the final (I hope) manuscript for the second of the three apps I’m publishing with Little Bahalia this year. It felt a little surreal (and wonderful) after spending so much time with TROOP. I have yet to write the third but I’m itching to get going…

I have another yet-to-be-announced publishing project I’m excited about for this year, and of course, I hope to revise one of my PB manuscripts into something “just right” that Erzsi could take out on submission before the end of the year.

Lastly, I started working on my first chapter book, intended to be one of a trilogy. Writing in longer form is new for me, and I’m loving the challenge and excitement!

Annie Leibowitz, Vanity Fair

Annie Leibowitz, Vanity Fair

I am now going to ask myself the question I asked Tara Lazar at the end of her interview in this series. I took contention with her answer and am relieved I can now give my own, far more appropriate response:

Johnny Depp or Ryan Reynolds?

Hello??!!?? Johnny Depp all the way my friends! Even though I was shocked to find Tara had chosen neither of the two, ever since then it’s clear she sides with Ryan Reynolds. Yes, he has the rippled abs, but does he have those eyes or that bone structure? (although I could live without the scarf) I think not!

My apologies to my male readers, but it just had to be said!

 

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Emma Walton Hamilton

Emma Walton Hamilton

Today is the day for Little GOLDen Book and Shel SILVERstein members of the 12 x 12 picture book writing challenge to post queries for critique by NYT bestselling author Emma Walton Hamilton. Queries must be posted by noon Mountain Standard Time tomorrow, January 22nd. Emma’s will critique the queries from January 23-25, with GOLD member queries taking priority if there is not enough time to get through all of them.

But you have to be a 12 x 12 member, so sign up today and don’t miss the chance to get your query in shipshape for submissions in 2013.

Emma is also offering a special deal for 12 x 12 members interested in joining the Children’s Book Hub. Details will be provided this week on the Membership Forum.

Good luck, and query on!

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